My Fantasy Creature

In scorching deserts all around the world explorers and scientists shake with fear due to the fact that most people do not return under mysterious circumstances….  

When walking through the sand mountains a mini sandstorm appears then fades away. Suddenly something appears - too fast for any human eye to detect its immediate presence – floating around and looking evil, with numerous “tentacle” like limbs, a pointy sharp nose and horrible teeth; it grins a hideous grin.  

Helpless and unarmed, an explorer walks to the mysterious creature to get a closer look at the so called “Monster Scorcher”. Suddenly a wall of sand builds a “border” between the explorer and his fellow friends. When the sand dies down there is nothing left of Scorcher and the explorer. The victims of this creature were taken back to Scorchers home.



5 Responses to “My Fantasy Creature”

  1. Hi Ramiz, Great post !!! Where is the Scorchers home ??????
    :?

  2. YAY! First to comment, cool post. How did you know that the explorer was taken to the Scorcher’s home?

  3. What a great story! Even I can’t write anything like that. Where is the home of the Scorcher?

  4. Hey ramz (ramiz)that was a great post, as a matter of fact it is so good i cant even explain it.

  5. Hey everybody,

    Scorchers home is in an unknown place….Thats why no-one has discovered their bodies or corpes. ;)

    Thanks for commenting. :lol:

    Ramiz :cool:

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